Generally OK, but, IMO: Should her take her dog for a walk at night time, she is not/[won't be/won't feel] scared. Other alternatives for some of the OK sentences: Having had finished his homework, he played Tomb Raider. She will go out with you when she will have finished her homework.
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Marius HancuGenerally OK, but, IMO:
Should her take her dog for a walk at night time, she is not/[won't be/won't feel] scared."Should she take" or the original.
Other alternatives for some of the OK sentences:
Having had finished his homework, he played