tense correction

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00Please correct this simple writing.02br
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00I went to my uncle's house yesterday. There, I saw my aunt, who looked like she came back from shopping -- by looking at the shopping bags strewn about near the door when I entered his house. "They are into tidiness," I thought; that was understanble since they both worked. Upon entering it, I also saw my grandmother's cup on the livingroom table and I gathered she must be either here or went by. My mind began to wonder, "Where would she be if she is here?" Anyway, I thought I was not going to go any where with that thought so I decided to turn on the television. My uncle had what looked to be a brand-new Samsung television and the picture quality was superb -- the pictures looked so real that it was like I was seeing the real stuff. In the middle of it, I heard the bedroom door opened and saw my grandmother. Instantly she yelled, "XXX, what are you doing watching that soap. You shouldn't watch that; you should be with your cousion helping him do his homework. Go to his room. He is waiting for you." For a moment, a thought came on in my mind that that sounded just like my mother. I thought I was free from all my mother's nagging when I came here and then, realized I met my "another" mother.02br
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00Hi, could I be able to put quotation marks around a word like "another" which we normaly use an article with and use/place an article before it?? 0-