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Mitsuo23 Posted 15 years ago
Grammar

Tell me your impression of this writing.

Hi,

I've quoted a paragraph from a book and would like to know your impression of it to see if it agrees with mine. Mine is actually not positive one, but I'm curious that this is because my native language is not english or there're some other reasons.

Around the middle of my shift, my name is put in a hat and tossed about with other co-workers names and then they pick the name and our manager has read the name and is purposely not telling us and he crumples up the paper and puts it in his pocket and says my name and I'm the page and have to deliver packages that have not been picked up.

Thanks,
M
  

Top answer

I don't think much of it either. It's a run-on, the tenses are all over, there's one obvious punctuation error, and it's... dull.

— BarbaraPA

  • I don't think much of it either.
  • It's a run-on, the tenses are all over, there's one obvious punctuation error, and it's...
  • dull.
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I don't think much of it either. It's a run-on, the tenses are all over, there's one obvious punctuation error, and it's... dull.
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Thank you! That's what I wanted to hear!
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Hi.I think you should try to write shorter sentences,otherwise you will face problems .Your sentences look dangling and diffrent elements - words,parts of speech- aren't linked properly. I appologize for critisizing so frankly.
good luck
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Oh, no, no. Please don't apologize to me because it's NOT my writing.

Thanks anyway for your opinion, which I totally agree with.
M
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