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The cartoon deals with extracurricular activities. In the cartoon we can see a young man carrying a bag. He might be a young student. At the first glance we can have an overview of what activities he does. The ball on her forehead shows that he plays Basketball. The Baseball glove and the hockey stick show that he also plays baseball and hockey. Furthermore, the music instruments in her back show that he also plays music. He might be a member of a brass band.
The cartoonist’s message might be to encourage student to sign up for interest or hobby groups. The students will then engage in fun and enriching extracurricular clubs and activities. These will help them to step out of their comfort zone and to meet Like-minded people.
However, the body language of the student in the cartoon shows that the bag is very heavy. He engages in many different extracurricular activities and it is now difficult for him to manage all these with school. In my opinion, it is not easy for student to manage various hobby and school. Students should normally focus their energy on only one extracurricular activity that is relevant to them and did not take a lot of time. However no category of activity is better than another. There is no distinction made in terms of value between fraternity chapters, cultural societies, orchestras, and football teams. Some schools and businesses traditionally favour activities that involve voluntary service to others (children, the elderly, the sick or injured, the homeless), while others may prefer activities that involve the acquisition of judgement, efficiency, organization, and cooperation, such as working as a journalist for the student newspaper or administering a volunteer project.