You might want to start off by double-checking the words you used with a dictionary. For example, 'oppurtunity' or 'opportunity'?
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I read the paragraph.What I don't like here are the format and its punctuation.If you are teaching the students, don't use the format like you are sending an SMS in your mobile.Don't use abbreviation because this is not a good example.