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Jobb Posted 21 years ago
Grammar

Teenager

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Teenager "clings love" to 33-year-old rich woman
Escapes with lots of stolen properties after feeling tired to toy with her

A 15-year-old teenager clung his love to a rich woman, reached out his hand to the woman's pocket, and then escaped with lots of stolen properties to Nanjing, where he got caught by police.
  

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Hi Jobb THis is a bit of a mess - you usually do better than this! Cling is not an appropriate verb to use in either the headline or text. I take it he pretended to be in love with her then robbed her?

— Nona the brit

  • Hi Jobb THis is a bit of a mess - you usually do better than this!
  • Cling is not an appropriate verb to use in either the headline or text.
  • I take it he pretended to be in love with her then robbed her?
  • Property is singular.
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Hi Jobb
THis is a bit of a mess - you usually do better than this!

Cling is not an appropriate verb to use in either the headline or text.

I take it he pretended to be in love with her then robbed her?

Property is singular.
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He was in love with her for the sake of money or property, not particularily intended to rob her, though he now actually did it.
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I see. The dangers of a younger partner!

Have another go at it.
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I'd like to see different versions!
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