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Behnam A Posted 14 years ago
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Technology has many positive and negative aspects in our life
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technology has many positive and negative aspects in our life .
I just mention some of them positive point:
1- it makes our life easier than before for example you can cook and wash every thing with high speed and high quality .
2- communicating with all the people in the world by the internet.
3-curing incurable patient these days with technology in medicin .
4- traveling by modern tarnsportation to every where without any trouble.
5-shopping / reading book / listening to music /,... on the internet.
6- waching movies by 3D tv .
and there are some nagative point here:
1-it makes people busy by Virtual games
2- it causes some concern
3- the mobile waves , magnetic waves destroy our brain cells
4- humankind being involve with some digitals system
Thanks
technology has many positive and negative aspects in our life .
I just mention some of them positive point:
1- it makes our life easier than before for example you can cook and wash every thing with high speed and high quality .
2- communicating with all the people in the world by the internet.
3-curing incurable patient these days with technology in medicin .
4- traveling by modern tarnsportation to every where without any trouble.
5-shopping / reading book / listening to music /,... on the internet.
6- waching movies by 3D tv .
and there are some nagative point here:
1-it makes people busy by Virtual games
2- it causes some concern
3- the mobile waves , magnetic waves destroy our brain cells
4- humankind being involve with some digitals system
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Thanks for the list, it's been really interesting and useful! Yes, I absolutely agree with you, technology has both positive and negative impacts. On the one hand, it makes our lives much easier with the help of different helpful apps.
- Thanks for the list, it's been really interesting and useful!
- Yes, I absolutely agree with you, technology has both positive and negative impacts.
- On the one hand, it makes our lives much easier with the help of different helpful apps.
- Every modern human who has a smartphone can easily access the Internet and find anything.
- At the same time, frequent usage of gadgets affects our health a lot: our eyes, musculoskeletal system, sleep and emotional problems, etc.
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Thanks for the list, it's been really interesting and useful! Yes, I absolutely agree with you, technology has both positive and negative impacts. On the one hand, it makes our lives much easier with the help of different helpful apps. Every modern human who has a smartphone can easily access the Internet and find anything. At the same time, frequent usage of gadgets affects our health a lot:
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