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Anonymous Posted 16 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Technical writing (Does anyone know how this should be changed???)
This is my WORST class
Rewrite the following instructions correctly. Change the text in any way that would make the instructions easier to follow.
The audience is middle school children who must do this project for science class. They are expected to take home the finished product as a holiday gift for a parent. Remember: Instructions should be clear, concise, organized, parallel, and free of wordy or unnecessary description. Planting Miss Daisy (or Petunia) Once you go to a store that sells flowering annuals, look around for a healthy six pack of some plant like petunias or geraniums that can be put in a separate pot and used as a gift for somebody you care about. You should separate the six little plants. Try to find a nice big pot that looks nice. You might want to paint the pot or put your handprints on it. That always looks nice. Mothers always cry when they get gifts that show their kids care about them. Anyway, you can find some little stones if the pot doesn't have a drainage hole in the bottom. That's where you put the stones so the roots don't get too wet and rot. You should fill up the pot half way with potting soil. Take the little plants and stick them in the pot. Fill up the rest of the pot with the dirt to cover the roots. Pat it down.Your mother or grandmother will love this gift and think you are great for giving it to her. Don't forget to water it and put it in a sunny place. Once in a while, like every month or so, you might want to give it some plant food.
Rewrite the following instructions correctly. Change the text in any way that would make the instructions easier to follow.
The audience is middle school children who must do this project for science class. They are expected to take home the finished product as a holiday gift for a parent. Remember: Instructions should be clear, concise, organized, parallel, and free of wordy or unnecessary description. Planting Miss Daisy (or Petunia) Once you go to a store that sells flowering annuals, look around for a healthy six pack of some plant like petunias or geraniums that can be put in a separate pot and used as a gift for somebody you care about. You should separate the six little plants. Try to find a nice big pot that looks nice. You might want to paint the pot or put your handprints on it. That always looks nice. Mothers always cry when they get gifts that show their kids care about them. Anyway, you can find some little stones if the pot doesn't have a drainage hole in the bottom. That's where you put the stones so the roots don't get too wet and rot. You should fill up the pot half way with potting soil. Take the little plants and stick them in the pot. Fill up the rest of the pot with the dirt to cover the roots. Pat it down.Your mother or grandmother will love this gift and think you are great for giving it to her. Don't forget to water it and put it in a sunny place. Once in a while, like every month or so, you might want to give it some plant food.
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I tried to change your absurd pink text with a black background. THAT should be changed. I'm not going to try to read any of this until it's not something that makes my eyes hurt.
- I tried to change your absurd pink text with a black background.
- THAT should be changed.
- I'm not going to try to read any of this until it's not something that makes my eyes hurt.
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I tried to change your absurd pink text with a black background. THAT should be changed. I'm not going to try to read any of this until it's not something that makes my eyes hurt.
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