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PreciousJones Posted 14 years ago
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Team sports
Can someone please confirm if I'm on the team? It doesn't look like there's an even number of females and males. I'm all for team sports, so I'll be there as long as there's room for me. Hopefully this is a competitive league as well as a fun one, because I want to be challenged to win!
Please proofread. Thank you!
Please proofread. Thank you!
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Can someone please confirm if I'm on the team? It doesn't look like there's an equal number of men and women . I'm all for team sports, so I'll be there as long as there's room for me.
- Can someone please confirm if I'm on the team?
- It doesn't look like there's an equal number of men and women .
- I'm all for team sports, so I'll be there as long as there's room for me.
- Hopefully this is a competitive league as well as a fun one because I want to be challenged to win!
- It looks fine to me (as modified).
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Can someone please confirm if I'm on the team? It doesn't look like there's an equal number of men and women. I'm all for team sports, so I'll be there as long as there's room for me. Hopefully this is a competitive league as well as a fun one because I want to be challenged to win!
It looks fine to me (as modified).
CJ
It looks fine to me (as modified).
CJ
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