Teaching pool
(I have posted this thread in another forum, but I don't get satisfied answer.)
How could I express the idea below in a sentence?
The ownership of the swimming pool belongs to Taoyuan Municipal Yangmei Junior High School. However, its operational rights plans to be transferred to another professional company. Because school has no sufficient professional competence, manpower, and finance to maintain the commercial operation of its swimming pool.
Therefore, which of the following wordings is better, #1, #2 or #3?
1. Operating Transfer of Taoyuan Municipal Yangmei Junior High School Teaching Pool
2. Taoyuan Municipal Yangmei Junior High School Teaching Pool Operating Transfer
3. Operational rights transfer of Taoyuan Municipal Yangmei High School's teaching pool
Top answer
If you are looking for a title, use this: Taoyuan School Pool Operation Transferred If you are looking for a sentence, use this: The operation of the Taoyuan Municipal Yangmei Junior High School Teaching Pool has been transferred.
- If you are looking for a title, use this: Taoyuan School Pool Operation Transferred If you are looking for a sentence, use this: The operation of the Taoyuan Municipal Yangmei Junior High School Teaching Pool has been transferred.
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If you are looking for a title, use this:
Taoyuan School Pool Operation Transferred
If you are looking for a sentence, use this:
The operation of the Taoyuan Municipal Yangmei Junior High School Teaching Pool has been transferred.
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