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PreciousJones Posted 15 years ago
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Please proofread.

Unfortunately, I won't be back in New York until the last week of July, so towards the end of this month. I've also chatted with Doug about the possibility of joining New Pathway Academy in Australia, but as of now, as we both know, it's only a premature prospect and with us being so far away it's quite hard to setup an interview.

And


Very nice of you and the genteman to give me this gift.

Sentence ok?


Thank you.
  

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Please proofread. Unfortunately, I won't be back in New York until the last week of July, so towards the end of this month. I've also chatted with Doug about the possibility of joining New Pathway Academy in Australia, but as of now, as we both know, it's only a premature prospect and with us being so far away it's quite hard to setup an interview.

  • Please proofread.
  • Unfortunately, I won't be back in New York until the last week of July, so towards the end of this month.
  • I've also chatted with Doug about the possibility of joining New Pathway Academy in Australia, but as of now, as we both know, it's only a premature prospect and with us being so far away it's quite hard to setup an interview.
  • Thanks.
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Please proofread.

Unfortunately, I won't be back in New York until the last week of July, so towards the end of this month. I've also chatted with Doug about the possibility of joining New Pathway Academy in Australia, but as of now, as we both know, it's only a premature prospect and with us being so far away it's quite hard to setup an interview.

Thanks.
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Hi,

Please proofread.

Unfortunately, I won't be back in New York until the last week of July,

so towards the end of this month.<<< sounds like you are talking about the future


I've also chatted <<< sounds like you are talking about the past.. So, whi
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Hi,

Sorry, Precious, I read it as a comma after month. Let me try again.

Unfortunately, I won't be back in New York until the last week of July, so towards the end of this month. I've also chatted with Doug about the possibility of joining New Pathway Academy in Australia, but as of now, as we both know, it's only a premature prospect
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Hi,

Part 1 already answered.


Very nice of you and the gentleman to give me this gift.

Sentence ok? Yes, but casual.

Clive

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