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I would not have had to go through the mental and physical agony of delivering this child, nor would I have had to bear the emotional suffering attendant to the birth.I wish I had people who loved me enough to cry if something ever happened to me.She was so slow on the uptake I could literally see all the info reaching her brain.The baby died 3 weeks before it was due to be born. It would habe been born 3 weeks after had it not died.You aren't as attached to some after 3 days as you are if  living together 3 months.Spending an extra 30 dollars a month on that isn't going to change a thing in our lives.

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I would not have had to go through the mental and physical agony of giving birth to this child, nor would I have had to bear the emotional suffering attendant on the birth.

I wish I had people who loved me enough to cry if something ever happened to me.

She was so slow on the uptake I could literally see all the info reaching her brain. The punctuation is OK, but you could literally see that? Have you got X-ray eyes?

The baby died three weeks before it was due. (to be born.) It would have been born three weeks later had it not died.

You aren't as attached to someone after three days as you are if you have lived with them for three months.

Spending an extra 30 dollars a month on that isn't going to change a thing in our lives.

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