Teacher plz grade my MLK analysis paper thank you

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The letter from Birmingham jail by Martin Luther King Jr. can gives people a very strong feeling after read it because the king use a lot of feeling to write this letter. And King’s use a lot of facts in his letter to let his audience believe what he says. Also king’s letter really can give his readers strong feelings, thoughts, and fears. After reading really can gives his readers something to think about and remember it on minds

In article King’s use ethics to let reader agree with his writing. King’s says “Everything was segregated, form businesses to churches to libraries. Blacks faced constant discrimination and the constant threat of violence.” It really can give his audience to think about human ethics; and give his reader to think about segregated is not allow in human ethics because we all are human and son of god.

King does also try to convince the audience through the sense use. For example, “I am sure that none of you would want to rest content with the superficial kind of social analysis that deals merely with effects and does not grapple with underlying causes”(598). It is this type of logical, reader can feel non-threatening after read king’s letter.

Also King uses strong logos again and again in his article. For example, king says “Sometimes a law is just on its face and unjust in its application” (602). And King uses fact to support it. “For instance, I have been arrested on a charge of parading without a permit. Now, there is nothing wrong in having an ordinance which requires a permit for a parade.” (602). Last he use logical conclusion with “But such an ordinance becomes unjust when it is used to maintain segregation and to deny citizens the First-Amendment privilege of peaceful assembly and protest" (602).” King uses this type of logical many times in his article, and let his reader agree with him.

Finally, I agree with King’s argument because King’s article really can give his audience kinds of feeling about ethics. The reason is we all are son of god, just have different color, but we all are human, we suppose need to have equal treatment. And King’s letter really can give his reader a very strong feeling.

AlpheccaStars · Accepted Answer

I have highlighted words that are incorrect and also offered some suggestions.

The letter from a Birmingham jail by Martin Luther King Jr. can gives people a very strong feeling after read it because the king (I don't think this person was a king) use a lot of feeling to write this letter. And King’s (Do you really mean to use the possessive here? "Use" can be either a verb or a noun. I am not sure which one you intended. If you mean a verb use it correctly and then do not put "of" after it.) use of a lot of facts in his letter to let his audience believe what he says. Also king’s letter really can give his readers strong feelings, thoughts, and fears. ~~After~~ reading his letter really can gives his readers something to think about and remember ~~it on minds~~

In his article King’s (Do you really mean to use the possessive here?) use of ethics to let reader agree with his writing. King’s (You can't use the possessive case with a verb as the object.) says “Everything was segregated, form businesses to churches to libraries. Blacks faced constant discrimination and the constant threat of violence.” It really can give his audience to think about human ethics; and give(You cannot "give to think", you can inspire someone to think, or cause someone to think, or give someone food for thought.) his reader to think about segregation (missing word) is not allow in human ethics because we all are human and son of ***.

King does also try to convince the audience through the ~~sense~~ use of the senses. (Do you mean the senses? like seeing, hearing, touch and taste?) For example, “I am sure that none of you would want to rest content with the superficial kind of social analysis that deals merely with effects and does not grapple with underlying causes”(598). It is this type of logical, reader can feel non-threatening after read king’s letter. (I do not understand what you mean to say here. Non-threatening is not a feeling. Is the letter written in a non-threatening tone? )

Also King uses strong logos (a logo is a commercial trademark or symbol of a company - do you really mean to say this?) again and again in his article. For example, king (You have to capitalize a proper name) says “Sometimes a law is just on its face and unjust in its application” (602). And King uses fact to support it. “For instance, I have been arrested on a charge of parading without a permit. Now, there is nothing wrong in having an ordinance which requires a permit for a parade.” (602). Last he use logical conclusion with “But such an ordinance becomes unjust when it is used to maintain segregation and to deny citizens the First-Amendment privilege of peaceful assembly and protest" (602).” King uses this type of logical (logicalis an adjective. You need a noun here as object of the preposition) many times in his article, and let his reader agree with him.

Finally, I agree with King’s argument because King’s article really can give his audience kinds of feeling about ethics. The reason is we all are son of ***, just have different colors, but we all are human, we suppose need (suppose need is not a correct verb phrase) to have equal treatment. And King’s letter really can give his reader a very strong feeling.

Saintxiao · Answer

thanks teacher would you plz check again

The letter from Birmingham jail by Martin Luther King Jr. can give people a very strong feeling after reading it because King uses a lot of feeling to write this letter. And King’s use of a lot of facts in his letter to let his audience believe what he says. Also king’s letter really can give his readers strong feelings, thoughts, and fears. ~~After~~ reading his letter really can give his readers something to think about and remember ~~it on minds~~

In his article King’s use of ethics to let reader agree with his writing. King’s (You can't use the possessive case with a verb as the object.) says “Everything was segregated, form businesses to churches to libraries. Blacks faced constant discrimination and the constant threat of violence.” It really can gives his audience to think about human ethics; and give(You cannot "give to think", you can inspire someone to think, or cause someone to think, or give someone food for thought.) his reader to think about segregation law is not allows in human ethics because we all are human and son of ***.

King does also try to convince the audience through use of the senses. (Do you mean the senses? like seeing, hearing, touch and taste?) For example, “I am sure that none of you would want to rest content with the superficial kind of social analysis that deals merely with effects and does not grapple with underlying causes”(598). It is this type of logical, reader can feel non-threatening after reading king’s letter.

Also King uses strong logical again and again in his article. For example, king (You have to capitalize a proper name) says “Sometimes a law is just on its face and unjust in its application” (602). And King uses fact to support it. “For instance, I have been arrested on a charge of parading without a permit. Now, there is nothing wrong in having an ordinance which requires a permit for a parade.” (602). Last he uses logical conclusion with “But such an ordinance becomes unjust when it is used to maintain segregation and to deny citizens the First-Amendment privilege of peaceful assembly and protest" (602).” King uses this type of logos many times in his article, and let his reader agree with him.

Finally, I agree with King’s argument because King’s article really can give his audience kinds of feeling about ethics. The reason is we all are son of ***, just have different colors, but we all are human, we are need to have equal treatment. And King’s letter really can give his reader a very strong feeling.

AlpheccaStars · Answer

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Saintxiao · Answer

The letter from Birmingham jail by Martin Luther King Jr. can gives people a very strong feeling after reading it because King uses a lot of feeling to write this letter. And King’s use of a lot of facts in his letter and make his audience believe what he says. Also king’s letter really can give his readers strong feelings, thoughts, and fears. ~~After~~ reading his letter really can give his readers something to think about and remember ~~it on minds~~

In his article King’s use of ethics to let reader agree with his writing. For example(You can't use the possessive case with a verb as the object. [teacher i just change King's says to for example, would you plz shows to how to rewrite {King's says} in correct way?] ), “Everything was segregated, form businesses to churches to libraries. Blacks faced constant discrimination and the constant threat of violence.” It really can gives his audience to think about human ethics; and let(You cannot "give to think", you can inspire someone to think, or cause someone to think, or give someone food for thought.) his reader to think about segregation laws is not allows in human ethics because we all are human and son of ***.

King does also try to convince the audience through use of the senses. (Do you mean the senses? like seeing, hearing, touch and taste?) For example, “I am sure that none of you would want to rest content with the superficial kind of social analysis that deals merely with effects and does not grapple with underlying causes”(598). It is this type of logical, reader can feel non-threatening after reading king’s letter.

Also King uses strong logical again and again in his article. For example, King (You have to capitalize a proper name) says “Sometimes a law is just on its face and unjust in its application” (602). And King uses fact to support it. “For instance, I have been arrested on a charge of parading without a permit. Now, there is nothing wrong in having an ordinance which requires a permit for a parade.” (602). Last he uses logical conclusion with “But such an ordinance becomes unjust when it is used to maintain segregation and to deny citizens the First-Amendment privilege of peaceful assembly and protest" (602).” King uses this type of logos many times in his article, and let his reader agree with him.

Finally, I agree with King’s argument because King’s article really can give his audience kinds of feeling about ethics. The reason is we all are son of ***, just have different colors, but we all are human, we are need to have equal treatment. And King’s letter really can give his reader a very strong feeling.

AlpheccaStars · Answer

teacher i just change King's says to for example, would you plz shows to how to rewrite {King's says} in correct way?
OK.

Here are some sentences:

This is Dr. King.
Dr. King wrote a letter.
My mother has blonde hair.
The king sits on a throne.

The subject is in subject case. Subject case is the same as the word you find when you look it up in a dictionary. We add "s" to make it plual (more than one.

When something belongs to someone, we use the possessive case. You make possessive case by adding -'s (apostrophe s) or - s' (s apostrophe) for plural.

Examples of POSSESSIVE case:

My mom's hair is blond. - The hair that belongs to my mom is blonde.
The boy's arm was hurt. - The arm belongs to the boy.
Dr. King's letter was short. - The letter that Dr. King wrote was short.
The boys' team beat the girls' team. (The team of the boys (plural) beat the team of the girls (plural). )

OK, here is your sentence

For example, King's says "...".

What belongs to Dr. King? If something belongs to him, it is missing from the sentence. If Dr. King is the subject, then you cannot write his name in the possessive case.

Errors in other places:

Proper nouns (names of people, cities, countries, streets, etc.) are always capitalized. The first letter is a CAPITAL.) So in the last sentence, "king" is someone who rules a country. It is not a proper name. It is not capitalized.
But Dr. King or Professor Jones, or Mrs. Helen Smith, or New York are always capitalized.
In your essay about MLK, you must always write Dr. King or King.
Never write dr. king, or king.

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