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Anonymous Posted 14 years ago
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Teacher help the grammar of the sentences

Which is write if none is okay, is there better way?

You'll never see a store with these kind of deals.


You'll never see a store that has these kind of deals.

Try to get all 10 of us in the same picture.

Try to get all 10 of us in the same frame.

Can we go to the front of the park. We are towards the back end of the park.

Can we go to the beginning of the park. We are towards the back end of the park.

The more pictures you take, the nicer pictures you'll have.

The more pictures you take, the more nice pictures you'll have.

I'm scared for tomorrow. I'm stressed our for tomorrow.

I'm scared about tomorrow. I'm stressed out about tomorrow.

I wish it was 10 pm.

I wish it were 10 pm.

Hopefully he's not going to get there any time soon.

Hopefully he's not going to get there any time now.

They have the same discounts in this store as that one.

There are the same discounts in this store as that one.

You'll save 100 dollars on 1500 if you buy it here.

You'll save 100 dollars every 1500 if you buy it here.

Don't cross the street while it's red.

Don't cross the street when it's red.

These shirts are of bad quality.

The quality of these shirts are bad.

We have 30 dollars for food tonight.

We have to eat for 30 dollars tonight.

You aren't allowed an overdraft.

You aren't allowed to overdraw your account.

I need a shirt of a different color.

I need a different colored shirt.

Should I not take into consideration this message.

Should I disregard this message.

You need to do something about that hair.

You need to do something to that hair.

Thank you for the time and effort

  

Top answer

These are OK as corrected: You'll never see a store with these kinds of deals. You'll never see a store that has these kinds of deals. Try to get all 10 of us in the same picture.

— Mister Micawber

  • These are OK as corrected: You'll never see a store with these kinds of deals.
  • You'll never see a store that has these kinds of deals.
  • Try to get all 10 of us in the same picture.
  • Try to get all 10 of us in the same frame.
  • Can we go to the front of the park?
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These are OK as corrected:

You'll never see a store with these kinds of deals.


You'll never see a store that has these kinds of deals.

Try to get all 10 of us in the same picture.

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Which is right; if none are okay, is there better way?


You'll never see a store with these kind of deals. ok
You'll never see a store that has these kind of deals. ok

Try to get all 10 of us in the same picture. ok
Try to get all 10 of us in the s
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question of the quality line.

The naturalness of the bottom 2

When you download movie torrents, some are of bad quality some are better.
I don't want to watch this movie if it's of bad quality. I'll wait for a dvd quality torrent.
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Hello Alphecca,

Could you tell me what the difference is?

I need a shirt of a different color.ok
I need a different colored shirt.ok But, the meaning is different than the sentence above.)

Which is correct?

I need a different colored/color shirt.

Thank you
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I need a different colored/color shirt.

It is ambiguous. Others may interpret it in other ways. It is a matter of parsing:

I need a different (colored shirt). - I need a different shirt, and that shirt is colored. (as opposed to white)
I need a (different color) shirt. - I need a shirt that has a different color than this one. For example if the present one is white, I would
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Ok, they may have been a more complex example.

Which is correct here Colored or color?

He has different colored socks on. One is black, the other is grey.

He has different color socks on . One is black, the other is grey.

Thank you Alphecca for the swift reply
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and mean the same thing?
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alc24and mean the same thing?
Yes.

Incidentally, you should use a semicolon in One is black; the other is gray.
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