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He is a very shrewd person; he calculates amount mentally much faster than you might calculate it with the help of calculator. You might forget by evening how many cups of tea you had gulped in a day, but he won’t (forget it) even after a week. Pappu is an ill-literate person, but he knows the skills and technique of running a business, he knows the thump rule of the business – customer is the king, satisfied customers come back again and knows how to maintain a long lasting relationship of loyalty. He keeps equal attention on each and every customer. He participate in all the discussions, debates with his customers, and sometimes take you by surprise, he might know more than you. In the conversation he jot downs the account of his regular customers who deal with him on credit on a dairy which he keeps handy with him.

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Try: He is a very shrewd person; he does mental arithmetic faster than you would do with a calculator. You may forget how many cups of tea you had in a day, but not him, not even after a week. Pappu may be illiterate, but he is skillfull in running a business.

  • Try: He is a very shrewd person; he does mental arithmetic faster than you would do with a calculator.
  • You may forget how many cups of tea you had in a day, but not him, not even after a week.
  • Pappu may be illiterate, but he is skillfull in running a business.
  • He knows the golden rule in business: customer is king.
  • That is because satisfied customers will return for business, form a long-lasting relationship, and remain loyal.
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He is a very shrewd person; he does mental arithmetic faster than you would do with a calculator. You may forget how many cups of tea you had in a day, but not him, not even after a week. Pappu may be illiterate, but he is skillfull in running a business. He knows the golden rule in business: customer is king. That is because satisfied customers will return for business, form a long-lasti
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He is a very shrewd person; he does mental arithmetic faster than you would do with a calculator. You may forget how many cups of tea you had in a day, but not him, not even after a week. Pappu may be illiterate, but he is skillfull in running a business. He knows the golden rule in business: customer is king. That is because satisfied customers will r
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...with the help of A calculator.
... and HE knows how to maintain a long lasting relationship of loyalty.
He PARTICIPATES in all the discussions,...
...and sometimes TAKES you by surprise.
In the conversation he JOTS the account DOWN of his...

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