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Scubasteven Posted 16 years ago
Grammar
Tatto in progress - So i would love if the grammar is correct !
So i have this tattoo in progress, done pretty much the whole piece, just need a finishing touch. And that would be a text.
Found this poem or whatnot. So i changed it a little bit, actually i pretty much changed the whole thing just used inspiration.
But i don't live in england, or a english speaking country, so my english isn't that good really.
But i gave it a shot. Anyhow, here it is:
On this earth you are no more, but in my heart you are forever.
It's hard now that you're not around, but in my mind you will always be here.
Death can't take away my memories or my love. So for me, dad, you are immortal.
Thanks for the help !
Found this poem or whatnot. So i changed it a little bit, actually i pretty much changed the whole thing just used inspiration.
But i don't live in england, or a english speaking country, so my english isn't that good really.
But i gave it a shot. Anyhow, here it is:
On this earth you are no more, but in my heart you are forever.
It's hard now that you're not around, but in my mind you will always be here.
Death can't take away my memories or my love. So for me, dad, you are immortal.
Thanks for the help !
Top answer
Poems are very personal. But I do feel your love for your dad. So I'll be brave in an attmept to whip up this version of your poem.
- Poems are very personal.
- But I do feel your love for your dad.
- So I'll be brave in an attmept to whip up this version of your poem.
- scubasteven Though you no longer with me on this earth, in my heart you are forever.
- It's hard realizing you're not around, but in my mind you will always be here.
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Poems are very personal. But I do feel your love for your dad. So I'll be brave in an attmept to whip up this version of your poem.
scubastevenThough you no longer with me on this earth, in my heart you are forever.
It's hard realizing you're not around, but in my mind you will always be here.
So my memories and love for you live on as you are immortal to me.
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scubasteventattoo in progressWhen it comes to text in tattoos, watch very, very carefully while it's being done. Those who do tattoos are notorious for losing their place in the text and putting in misspelled words.
With all that text that you want to put in, I would be surprised if there aren't at least three misspelled words in the final tattoo, w
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Thanks !
One question though, "Though you no longer with me on this earth, in my heart you are forever"'
I may be wrong but should it be "Though YOU'RE no longer..." or maybe "Though you no longer are ...."
The "are" seems to be missing. But then i again i can be wrong.
One question though, "Though you no longer with me on this earth, in my heart you are forever"'
I may be wrong but should it be "Though YOU'RE no longer..." or maybe "Though you no longer are ...."
The "are" seems to be missing. But then i again i can be wrong.
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Answered the wrong person.
The answer to you is:
Thanks for the reply.
Yeah i'm well aware of the possibility, but i trust this tattoo-artist.
Anyways, i'm the one with the pen, im drawing up the tattoos. And this one will be written on the computer and then finally printed out on a stencil. I will be checking for missspelled word and so on like 10 times befor
The answer to you is:
Thanks for the reply.
Yeah i'm well aware of the possibility, but i trust this tattoo-artist.
Anyways, i'm the one with the pen, im drawing up the tattoos. And this one will be written on the computer and then finally printed out on a stencil. I will be checking for missspelled word and so on like 10 times befor
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