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The diagrams below show the water supply system in Australia present and in future.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
You should write at least 150 words.
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The diagram illustrates the present water supply system in Australia.
Overall, it is noticeable that there are three kinds of water in the water system. These are pure water for use, stormwater, and wastewater. The water treatment plant is the only place where receives a kind of water from two sources, which are the dam, or storage, and facilities in the urban areas.
There are two kinds of water going out of the dam after being stored up to a certain amount. These are pure water and wastewater. Wastewater flows to the water treatment plant while pure water is used in city facilities such as households, shops, factories. From here, besides the wastewater sent to the water treatment plant, appears another kind, which is stormwater. Stormwater is born due to the rain. And following the rain, this kind of water comes back into the river.
Pure water and stormwater only appear once in the present water supply, from the dam to the city, and from the city to the river. However, wastewater appears twice in this system.
That diagram doesn't make sense (water treatment and wastewater treatment are totally different)! It also does not provide enough details to write a minimum of 150 words. I'm sorry you've wasted your time doing that task.
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That diagram doesn't make sense (water treatment and wastewater treatment are totally different)! It also does not provide enough details to write a minimum of 150 words. I'm sorry you've wasted your time doing that task. In future, be more careful about where you get your practice material from.