Task1 IELTS
The given bar chart gives data on the percentage of difficulties people have to face when they go abroad.
Overall, it is apparent that people aged from 35 to 54 have the same proportion of problems; meanwhile, the younger age group and the older one get considerable difficulties in integration problems.
The youngest age group find developing friendships the most problematic, at around 45%, compared to approximately 37% to the 35-54 year-old group. While the figure for the oldest group declines significantly, with about 22%. The second problem people aged 18-34 face is looking for accommodation, with around 40%. On the other hand, is is easier for the people over 55 to find places to live, approximately 20%.
With around 53%, learning to speak the local language is the most difficulty to the oldest group. By contrast, there is approximately 30% belongs to the youngest one. While the figure for the middle group shares the same proportion with making new friends at around 35%.
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The given bar chart gives data on the percentage of difficulties (Incorrect) people have to face when they go abroad . (Incorrect description of the chart) Overall, it is apparent that people aged from 35 to 54 have the same proportion of problems; (Incorrect description) meanwhile, the younger age group and the older one get (wrong word) considerable difficulties in integration problems. The members of the youngest age group find developing friendships the most problematic, at around 45%, compared to approximately 37% to the 35-54 year-old group.
- The given bar chart gives data on the percentage of difficulties (Incorrect) people have to face when they go abroad .
- (Incorrect description of the chart) Overall, it is apparent that people aged from 35 to 54 have the same proportion of problems; (Incorrect description) meanwhile, the younger age group and the older one get (wrong word) considerable difficulties in integration problems.
- The members of the youngest age group find developing friendships the most problematic, at around 45%, compared to approximately 37% to the 35-54 year-old group.
- While the figure for the oldest group declines significantly, with about 22%.
- ("with around/about" is not natural English) The second problem people aged 18-34 face is looking for accommodation, with around 40% .
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The given bar chart gives data on the percentage of difficulties (Incorrect) people have to face when they go abroad. (Incorrect description of the chart)
Overall, it is apparent that people aged from 35 to 54 have the
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