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There are two maps, which show the island, before and after the changes and new buildings. Overall, there are many significant changes such as adding accommodation and swimming facilities.
As it shown in the map, there is a pier in the south of the island that is connected to the reception which is located in the center of the island. There is a restaurant in the north of the island which is above the reception. The way that connect the pier to the restaurant is vehicle tracks. There are accommodations on the both sides of reception. On the west side, there is the foot path that is connected the huts to each other. The huts surrounded the environment that there are many trees in. also there is swimming facilities on the western side. The accommodation on the east side is larger but there is the same connected way between them. The eastern side of the island covered with woodland.

AlpheccaStars · Accepted Answer

You need to have a better logical structure to your paragraphs. I suggest 3 paragraphs for Task 1 essays.

Paragraph 1 - describe the figure or table. Do not write anything about the information in them.
Paragraph 2 - Write 2 or 3 sentences about the most important observations.
Paragraph 3 - Give some interesting details about the information.

I have highlighted the text with mistakes or unnatural English. I also copied an example essay that I wrote for another student with the same task.

I organized this essay a little bit differently. Paragraph 2 describes the first map, and paragraph 3 describes the second map.

The trees are typical of tropical islands. They are palm trees which grow on beaches. It is not a woodland.

There are two maps, which show the island, before and after the changes and new buildings. Overall, there are many significant changes such as adding accommodation and swimming facilities.
As it shown in the map (which one? , there is a pier in the south of the island that is connected to the reception which is located in the center of the island. There is a restaurant in the north of the island which is above the reception. The way that connect the pier to the restaurant is vehicle tracks. There are accommodations on the both sides of reception. On the west side, there is the foot path that is connected the huts to each other. The huts surrounded the environment that there are many trees in. also there is swimming facilities on the western side. The accommodation on the east side is larger but there is the same connected way between them. The eastern side of the island covered with woodland.

Example essay:

The first map shows an uninhabited small low-lying island about 230 meters long (east-west) by 50 to 80 meters wide (north-south). The second map shows the island after its development.

The undeveloped island has a small beach on the western end, and a site suitable for a pier on the south side. There are a few palm trees growing, but otherwise, the island is empty.

After development, many visitor facilities can be seen. There is a pier for small boats to dock and discharge passengers and supplies. The reception building is about twenty meters from the pier, and behind it, perhaps ten meters, a restaurant. To the east and west of the reception, there are accommodations, in the form of huts. The east section has nine huts, and the west has five. There are footpaths leading between all the huts, the beach, the restaurant and reception, and a circular vehicular track around the reception building leading to the pier. The swimming beach is closer to the west section. The eastern end of the island has not been developed.

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