Task 2 writing, please help me to check it.

Topic: Students learn more lesson from teachers than other sources (e.g internet or TV). To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In modern educational system, internet is one of the most helpful for students to do somethings such as studying, learning foreign languages or entertainment. Therefore, I totally disagree that students get more lesson from teachers than other documents and people.

In most countries, students just have to be at school in short time, just around 4 hours. In fact, they do not have enough time to get more knowledge from teachers in school. Instead, they spend time in making a teamwork with their friends after schooling to debate the assignment together. Furthermore, teachers also have a few times to teach their students in school. If teachers had more time, they would help completely their students broaden their knowledge day by day.

In addition, students in modern life get smarter than the previous student generation. With knowledge that they learnt lesson from teachers, they realized that those knowledge was not enough to answer completely all of questions. First, the internet, which is the most popular tool to do most things, will be the greatest tutor with many lessons such as Math lessons, Biology lessons. Moreover, students can learn not only academic knowledge but also general knowledge if they know exactly how to study as much as possible in the internet sources. Second, they also improve themselves when they communicate assignment together. Actually, some students are good at some aspects like Music, Art, Chemistry and so that they will get helpful knowledge from each other. For example, because of learning many lessons in the internet like Chemistry lessons, Guitar lessons, Oliver, who is my classmate, is being good at many different aspects such as Biology, Guitar, Math and becomes a best student in my school.

In conclusion, students in modern educational system accumulate their knowledge from lessons in some sources like the internet, TV more than in class with their teachers.