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Task 2: Write an essay of about 350 words to express your opinion on the following issue Discipline is an ever-increasing problem in many schools in Vietnam. Some people think that discipline should be the responsibility of teachers, while others...

TASK 2:

Discipline is now a rising issue in Viet Nam’ education system. While some people hold the idea that teachers should be responsible for it, others agrue that it is parents who should take charge. In this essays, both views will be analyzed.

There is common belief that children should be taught and trained about discipline in the school. An important reason is that teachers has been trained to teach so they have a effective method in training discipline and punishing, which helps student take in more easily. Cheating, for example, is a common disobeying-rule instance to students, teachers has experience in observing during the exams, so they will notice all the tricks of student. If children are caught cheating and justly punished, it is likely that they will not make mistakes again.

However , there are more grounds that parents should be in charge of their child’s discipline. This is mostly because they are the ones who understanding their son or daughter most, and they have taught them basic lessons since the very first steps of life .Therefore, it’s likely that a child will behave well in the future , if their parents taught discipline approriately when they are young enough to obey. Moreover, to some special cases, when teachers are given little authority on teaching discipline, student’s parents play the utmost role in it. A

In conclusion, With the discipline matter, although teachers have proper and effective ways to discipline students, parents is the ones who can train their child to regulations due to aforementioned reasons. In my own view, it is essential that parents should stop spoiling their children when they are young, instead, teach them to be dependent and rule-obeying.

  

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