Task 2 please help me

Some people believe that crime is a result of social problems and poverty, others think that crime is a result of bad person’s nature. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

It is supposed that innate characteristics are a greater cause of the commission of a crime. Others, myself included, argue for committing an offense is largely a consequence of social issues and poverty.

There is a belief that a person’s nature has long been viewed to provoke crime behavior. First, a certain group of people finds some ways that they can gain money instead of making an honest living through working hard. The lazy and greedy, for instance, choose to become a thief or robbery in a night or less an hours of action they gain themselves keep with the amount of money equivalented with salaries maybe in months or years working earned. Second, those who are aggressive more likely to commit an offense than gentle ones. Chances are impulsive people will choose violence over the peaceful settlement and what followed is turn to a career of crime.

Nevertheless, it seems to me that social issues and poverty are the main cause of crime. There are many problems in society which lift up the crime rate. For example, unemployment status has climbed in our contemporary society lead to the rise of crime. Be losen the source of income, they find themselves a way to support their kids is to steal or cheat the others in the street or pickpocket in the market. Poverty also breeds malicious intents that unlawful, yet lucrative activities typically provide the easiest and fastest way out. Keep that thought in mind, the underprivileged can do anything even it means breaking the law to lift themselves out of tough time.

In conclusion, although both views certainly have justified some extent, it seems to me that the principal causes of crime are a result of social conditions and problems.