In their daily live have still these dangerous that make to feel unsafe when people go out home or at home, and it should be dealt with by some effective solutions.
There are some reasons why now people have feeling scares in everywhere. Because, there are numerous news about violent fight, sexual assault, drug abuse, terrorist activities or traffic accident. Therefore, when people constant exposure with kinds of news mentioned above that makes people nervous for their safety even at home. I usually reading news about burglaries news and I always have a fear of someone who break in my home and take damages to me. In recent years, the amount of traffic casualties has increased significant that makes people feel unsafe when travelling on the road . Another reason is that regular appearance of extreme weather events are such as earthquake and violent storm. For example, people always live in fear about flood which causes serious damages to residents and their property in central Vietnam.
Additionally, we should have some feasible solutions to resolve problems. The first measure, government should encourages news provider given these more positive news. Need to establish surveillance camera which would help people have safe driving habit, prevent traffic offenses and improve it. Besides, the government and the huge organization need to work together to prevent terrorist activities and enhance security. People need have early warning system reduce damages which causes by disaster.
In conclusion, there are always threats around us and we will always need the most positive measures to solve problems.
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Vermus .BigdreamIn their daily live have still these dangerous that make to feel unsafe when people go out home or at home
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