Write about the following topic.
Some people think living in big cities is bad for people’s health.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
It can be argued that living in urban area can have some effect into people's health. In this essay, I am going to demonstrate the reason why I agree with this extent, but in some situation I think there are also some valuable when living in huge cities
On the one hand, the waste which come from factories and the huge amount of cabon dioxide that come from vehicles and industrial areas or even come from kitchen in our house can harm into people's health. Especially has a huge effect to older people and children who can be harm easily. Not only that, pollition air, water and soil in urban area can lead to a lot of disease such as allergy which is really familar, but more important it can lead to dead disease such as cancer
In the other hand, It hard to be denied about the values when live in a big cities, espeacially in technologies and medical system. Nomally, big hospital tend to be placed in huge cities. That is a reason why this area can have a modern medical system than others. Not only that, people who live in urban area can have chance to have a better health care come from insurance polices. Take Japan for an example, this country have a lot of elderly people, so the Japanese government are having a lot of policies that help their citizens can use the medical system for free. That is reason why older people and children in japan, especially who live in big cites such as Tokyo can use the best medical service in the world but do not need to pay any fee.
In conclusion, there are a lot of reason that can harm to people's health when their live in big cities, but the convenient and good medical service can also help increase the healthy of citizens
It can be argued that living in large urban [ 1] area s can have some detrimental effect into on people's health. In this essay, I am going to demonstrate the reason why I agree with this to some extent, but in some situation I think there are also some valuable when living in huge [ 2 ] large cities also has its advantages. On the one hand, [ 3] many large cities today are quite polluted.
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It can be argued that living in large urban [ 1] areas can have some detrimental effect into on people's health. In this essay, I am going to demonstrate the reason why I agree with this