TASK 2_ FUTURE AND PRESENT

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An American film actor once said, “Tomorrow is important and precious”. Some
people think individuals and society should pay more attention to the future than to the present. Do you agree or disagree?.

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As a saying, "Tomorrow is important and precious", many people have believed that we should pay more attention to the future than the present. In my opinion, while I agree that future is worth considering, I also believe that we should try our best in present.
On the one hand, future can be important in some ways. Firstly, it makes us motivated to head forward in life. No matter how tough our life is, if we believe that dawn will eventually break the night, that the following day is another wonderful day, we will be more optimistic. Secondly, setting future as our goal helps us design a detailed plan for the present. For example, if one wants to be a teacher, he has to know which path he should take right now and be prepared for it.
On the other hand, if we do not pay attention to present, we will miss priceless moments at the moment. At the end of the day, future, however detailed we can imagine, have not come yet. It is not a wise decision when you try to catch something that have not existed while ignoring the moments in present. For example, although it is good when one try to study hard to become a teacher in the future, he should also enjoy his moments with its fullest when he has fun with his family and friends, which is unique and may not repeat in the future. Moreover, it is the present that leads to the future. We may not fully know the unknown future, but the present is completely under our control
In conclusion, I hold the perception that although it is true that the future holds some important values, it is better to focus more on the present.