Task 2 - Causes and solutions

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People today do not feel safe either at home or when they are out. What are the causes? What are the solutions?

Nowadays, the society contains more and more threats which make people feel unsafe either in their own houses or when they are in public places. There are variety of possible reasons for this issue, but steps can definitely be taken to tackle it.

In my opinion, there are three main factors to blame for people’s unsafe feeling. First, traffic accidents tend to be more common and terrible with the result that thousands of people are injured and killed. Second, the economic inequality and social evils such as drinking, drugging or gambling cause the significant increase in criminal rate. People must be alert to the possibility of theft or robbery anywhere and anywhen. Third, because of devastating attacks, terrorism is considered as one of the biggest threats to the security of the world. Obviously, suicide bombings terrorist groups carry out happen suddenly and killed a lot of ordinary people.

Some measures should be implemented to deal with these root causes of the problem. I believe that the change must start with education, which is the basis of social order. An effective education system considerably enhances the awareness of people about laws and social problems so well-educated people are likely to show morally-based behaviors and follow rules. Besides, governments should improve security system, especially surveillance cameras to prevent unlawful actions and discover terrorism plots timely. Moreover, some tougher policies need to be introduced to ease social conflicts, guarantee human rights as well as narrow the gap between the rich and the poor.

In conclusion, various solutions can be taken to maintain a stable society in which everyone feels secure about their lives.