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Nguyễn Hùng Minh 10A7 Posted 5 years ago
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Task 2: As a part of education, students should spend a period of time living in another country to learn its language and culture. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

With the inexorable extension of transactions over the globe, the multicultural and multilingual ignorance substantially turns into a severe flaw as it vastly avert the goods delivery. This, however, gives rise to the inquiry of whether utilizing an expense of time living abroad to learn its language and culture is valuable. Having considered those views via thorough reasoning, I have come to the decision of a disposal.


When it comes to the accompanying flaws of this trend, the notion springing up to my mind is that these pupils are likely made to work ceaselessly. Studying abroad means either working ceaselessly to make ends meet or learning and fostering cognition spontaneously. Taken, for example, it may be an enlightened scenario for those whose life expenditure from their parents can be monthly replenished. However, those whose monetary supplement is considered inferior to its wealthy counterparts, are likely to be obsessed with making money to keep pace with various costs including rental fee, tuition fee or even travel fee, which will surely cumulatively render their well-beings down and put frontiers for their study. As such, this act may help them learn neither language nor culture well.


Additionally, having thoughts of refinement in studying overseas in their youth, students are taking a severe toll on the contribution of their talents to the country that they are living. To practically consider, what is referred to as studying in another country may possibly turn into the permanent settlement as well as no further contribution to their own country and completely fruitless subsidies. Granted, one may claim that by being a dweller, they have the rights to manipulate their study by themselves depending on flourishing conditions. That may not be wholeheartedly sound because besides the right to decide, they also have the right to sacrifice for their country. Moreover, the government is now utilizing enormous expenditure for bettering national talents that results in provision of foreign teachers and courses which are equivalent to those in other countries. Therefore, it is irresistible to say that studying overseas is unnecessary.


In a nutshell, students should not experience studying abroad as a portion of the official curriculum in light of extravagant costs and also the loss of talented people.

  

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Task 2: As a part of education, students should spend a period of time living in another country to learn its language and culture. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The development of integration over the globe gives rise to questions of students spending some time living abroad to learn another language and culture is valuable. Having considered this suggestion thoroughly

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The development of integration over the globe (That does not make sense. Integration primarily refers to local schools which have equal representation of minorities.) gives rise to questions of students spending some time living abroad to learn another language and culture is valuable. (Your

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