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The table shows the percentage of personal income devoted to savings in seven countries in three separate years 1970, 1990, 2000.

To begin, there were major changes in the savings percentage in Italy and Canada. In 1970, Italy had the highest ratio of the selected nations, with nearly 30% of income being saved. Nevertheless, this ratio more than halved over the following 30 years to around 10%. Similarly, 6% of personal income was saved by Canadians in 1970, this figure more than doubled after the following 20 years. However, it subsequently plunged to end at 2 % by 2000.

In contrast, the proportion of personal savings changed less dramatically in the remaining nations, with the ratio in most counties falling. For example, France’s percentage decreased from nearly 19% to around 14% over the period. Only UK did not follow the downward trend, with its starting ratio of 9%, falling marginally in the next 20 years before rising to finish at just over 11%, higher than in 1970.

Overall, although the savings percentage generally decreased, there were differences in the degree of change.