Task 1 writing

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The bar chart gives information about the number of students who chose university subjects in terms of gender in 2005.In general, almost females chose social sciences and the males liked natural sciences

As can be seen, the choice of males and females was different. Females chose language with a rate of nearly 20 thousands people, on the contrary, the number of males who chose it was only three thousands people. That is to say, the language was the largest difference between males and females. On the other hand, sciences, literature, law and mathematics were chosen by males more than females, especially sciences, the figure for males was nearly 20 thousands and greater 10 thousands than females. A stricking feature is that humanties was the only subjects which boy'choice was the same as girl's

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