Task 1 production and consumption of electricity

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Please help with this task 1.The given bar graph presents the information about ten countries that produced and utilized maximum electricity in 2014.Overall, it can be seen that China and the USA were in the lead for producing and consuming the largest amount of electricity, whereas South Korea was in the bottom. It can also be noticed that with the exception of Germany all countries produced more electricity than they consumed. China and the United States's  production and utilization of electricity was far greater than all other eight countries. With the production of 4099 and consumption of 3866 billion kilowatts of energy, the United State's figures were four times more than that of Russian. However, it was still almost a thousand billion kilowatt less than China.For the rest of the countries, the production and utilization ranged between 1057 and 1038 to 485 and 449 respectively; Russia being at the third and South Korea at the last spot. With Germany, it was short of almost 50 billion kilowatts with 526.6 billion kilowatt in production and 582.5 billion kilowatt in usage.

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The ~~given~~ (Do not use given, or any other similar participle) bar graph presents the information about (This is very vague. Information about countries may be their size, population, percent of elderly, and so on. Most countries generate and use electricity, so ten of them would not be remarkable.. ) ten countries that produced and utilized maximum electricity (This means that they reached their limits of production. They used all their capacity.) in 2014.

Overall, it can be seen that China and the USA were in the lead for producing and consuming the largest amount of electricity, whereas South Korea was in tenth place ~~the bottom~~. ~~It can also be noticed that~~ I(Do not waste words) with the exception of Germany all countries produced more electricity than they consumed.

China and the United States's production and utilization of electricity was far greater than all other eight countries. (This is repetition. Try not to repeat the same ideas.) With the production of 4099 and consumption of 3866 billion kilowatts of energy, the United State's ~~figures~~ ~~were~~ had four times more than ~~that of~~ Russian. However, it was still almost a thousand billion kilowatt (wrong form) less than China.

For the rest of the countries, the production and utilization ranged between 1057 and 1038 to 485 and 449 respectively; Russia being at the third and South Korea at the last spot. (This is repetition. Try not to repeat the same ideas.) With Germany, it was short of almost 50 billion kilowatts with 526.6 billion kilowatt in production and 582.5 billion kilowatt in usage.

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The bar chart compares the amounts of electricity generated and used in the ten countries with the world's highest values. Data is given for 2014, the units are billions of kWh, and the bars are ordered from highest to lowest production.

Here are some interesting comparisons:

The ratio of the amounts of electricity produced in China (the highest producer) to lowest (Republic of Korea) was more than 11:1.
The US produced about 75% of the amount of electricity that China did. Whereas China used nearly all that it produced, the US consumed about 95% of its production.
There was a large gap between the second and third ranking countries. Russia, in third place, produced 25% of that of the US, and slightly less than 20% of that of China. Like China, it used almost all of the electricity that it generated.
France, Brazil and Germany (ranking 7, 8 and 9) had very similar production values, ranging from 526 to 561 billion kWh. This was a little more than one tenth that of China.
India consumed only 80% of what it generated. That was the lowest percentage of all the countries listed.
In terms of geographic distribution, there are no countries in Africa in the top ten and only one (Brazil) in South America. The Asian continent had the largest representation with four countries.

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