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I've managed to finish an IELTS task 1 essay on MAP type. Could you please take your time to review it for me!
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This is my essay.
The chart illustrates how glass bottles are recycled and delivered to the customer supermarket.
Overall, there are three main stages in the whole glass bottles recycling process, beginning with collecting bottles and ending with the delivery of products in new bottles to the supermarket.
Firstly, wasted glass bottles are delivered by truck to a glass recycling factories after being collected to the collection point.
At the second step of the process, the cleaning plants are used to clean those bottles and they are then separated into clear, green and brown glass. Then the wasted glass bottles are transported into recycling plant before being burned in the furnace. This recycled glass is now in the liquid form and it is joined with the new liquid glass ready for moulding in the bottle shape.
The final stage of the process is the new bottles are used in different products with many purposes and then ready for sale in the supermarket for the customer.
The chart ( Wrong word. This figure can be described as a diagram, process map, or illustration) illustrates how glass bottles are recycled and delivered to the customer supermarket. ) new bottles to the supermarket.
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The chart (Wrong word. This figure can be described as a diagram, process map, or illustration) illustrates how glass bottles are recycled and delivered to the customer supermarket.
Overall, there are three main stages in the whole glass bottles recycling process, beginning with collecting bottles and ending with
Overall, the recycling of plastic bottles is a cyclical process that consists of use, collection, sorting, crushing, cleaning, pelletizing, making new plastic products, and reuse.
After plastic bottles are used, they are discarded in recycling bins, waiting for trucks to transport them to cleaning and a recycling plant. Once there, they are sorted and those that can be reused are compress