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Vermus .Bigdream Posted 8 years ago
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The line graph provides the average monthly temperatures in different countries ( Paris, Dubai, Sydney). Unites are measured in degree celcius.

Overall, the temperatures of Sydney is highest in the Jan and Dec month, while Paris and Dubai which were high temperatures in middle year (from Jun to Aug) after that dropping gradually to in the December.

With regards to the temperature in Sydney, it begin around 23 degree in Jan after decreasing to under 15 degree in Jul before increasing sharply, about 23 degree in the end year. In contrast, Paris where the temperatures is lowest among the three countries, at 5 degree in first month and which figure reach a peak at 20 degree from Jul to Aug and declining significantly to 5 degree in the last year.

The degree in Dubai start approximately 20 degree and continue dramatically rising over 35 degree in Aug and the finish at 21 degree in Dec.

  

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You have trouble with singular / plural and subject/verb agreement. This is beginner's English grammar. The line graph provides the average monthly temperatures in different countries (incorrect.

  • You have trouble with singular / plural and subject/verb agreement.
  • This is beginner's English grammar.
  • The line graph provides the average monthly temperatures in different countries (incorrect.
  • ) ( Paris, Dubai, Sydney).
  • Unites are measured in degree (wrong form) celcius .
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You have trouble with singular / plural and subject/verb agreement. This is beginner's English grammar.



The line graph provides the average monthly temperatures in different countries (incorrect. Paris is not a country.) ( Paris, Dubai, Sydney). Unites are measured in

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