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Vermus .Bigdream Posted 7 years ago
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Task 1: Please check out and give me some advices.

The charts provide the percentage of using transportation for others go to one university for job and learning between 2004 and 2009.

Overall, people used the most of the bus and car in the both year. Additionally, only a small proportion of using transportation was depend on bicycle, train and walking.

In 2004, the rate of using car which was highest, at 51%, while the figure for bus was significantly lower, at 33%. 9% of the total using was bicycle compared to 3% on train. Meanwhile, the percentage of using walking accounted for only 4$ of the total.

In 2009, because university had more bus station from 2006. Therefore, the proportion of using bus went up by 13% to 46% and became the highest rate in the charts. By contrast, the figure for using car decreased dramatically more than 20% to 28%. While, the were slight increases to 4% and 6% in the rate of using train and walking respectively. Bicycle’s figure was also moderate rises, to 16%.

  

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Bigdream Task 1: Please Check Out And Give Me Some Advices . "Check out " means pay the bill and leave. It also is informal for die .

  • Bigdream Task 1: Please Check Out And Give Me Some Advices .
  • "Check out " means pay the bill and leave.
  • It also is informal for die .
  • Do you want us to die?
  • Advice is non-count.
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Vermus .BigdreamTask 1: Please Check Out And Give Me Some Advices.

"Check out " means pay the bill and leave. It also is informal for die.

Do you want us to die?

Advice is non-count. The plural is incorrect.


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Vermus .BigdreamThe charts provide the percentage of using transportation for others go to one university for job and learning between 2004 and 2009.

Your first sentence has many mistakes.

The charts provide the percentage of using transportation for others go to one university for job and learning b

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