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The table shows the amount of money given in aid of the technology of developing countries by charities in the US, EU, and other countries from 2006 to 2010.

The table illustrates how much money donated by the aid organizations in the US, EU, and other countries in terms of technical assistance to developing nations between 2006 and 2010.

Overall, the total amount of money in aid of all charities was increased in this period. The US donor countries gave the most money to support the underdeveloped countries.

In 2006, The US charities donated $ 9.7 bilions which constituted two- third of the total amount of money of all organizations. Then this value continued to increase progressively over each year then reached $ 22.7 bilions in 2010. The same pattern was true in the total bilions dollars all charities donated topped the table at $ 30 bilions at the end of the period.

However, contributions from other charities also increased. The amount of money given by EU countries was $ 3.3 bilions, $0.6 bilions higher than that of other countries. From 2006 to 2008, there was a growth in the amount of money granted by EU countries and other countries, followed by the slight fall in the next year before rising again to $ 4 bilions in EU countries and $ 3.3 bilions in other countries in 2010.