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The charts illustrate how Australia and France consumed five different sources of fuel by electric products in 1980 and 2000.
At the first glance, it is clear that, the total unit production of these two countries increased after 20 years. Nuclear power was only used in France for electricity production.
The year 1980, half of total production in Australia was coal, doubled that of France. Also, the figure for Hydro power in Australia was 20, accounted for a much bigger pieces than France with the same source, 5. In opposite, the units of oil in Australia that year was only 10 while France consumed 20. Besides, only France used Nuclear Power for 15 units of electricity production. Natural Gas consumptions in the two countries were almost the same, 20 and 25 respectively.
In 2000, coal accounted for most of electricity production in Australia, at 130 units when France used the same amounts in 1980. However, people in France consumed five times nuclear power in electricity than 1980. In the same year, only 2 units of Natural Gas were used in these two countries.
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The charts illustrate how Australia and France consumed five different sources of fuel by electric products (Not quite right) in 1980 and 2000. ) T he total unit production of these two countries increased after 20 years. Nuclear power was only used in France for electricity production.
- The charts illustrate how Australia and France consumed five different sources of fuel by electric products (Not quite right) in 1980 and 2000.
- ) T he total unit production of these two countries increased after 20 years.
- Nuclear power was only used in France for electricity production.
- The year 1980, half of (missing word) total production in Australia was coal , (No, the graph does not show how much coal was produced.
- ) doubled (wrong form) that of France.
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The charts illustrate how Australia and France consumed five different sources of fuel by electric products (Not quite right) in 1980 and 2000.
At the first glance, it is clear that, (Those words are grammatical, but absolutely useless in describing the figures to your readers.) The total unit production of the
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