Task 1: (Map)

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The maps illustrate how a museum and its surroudings changed between 1990 and 2000.

Overall, the museum and its surroundings saw significant development in terms of room allocation in the museum, car park.

Looking more details in the left of the diagrams, there was the museum which was expanded to the east. Moreover, while restaurant and entrance remained unchanged, the exhibition room on the left-hand corner of the museum was shrunk in order to make room for the shop next to it. In the north-east of the museum, two exhibition rooms were converted to a larger exibition room. Futhermore, the cottage near the museum was replaced by the coffee shop.

With regard to the right-hand corner of the maps, a new car park was constructed in place of a garden before. Besides, the garden and the main road in the top and bottom of the maps did not show any development. The car park opposite to the museum remained intact.