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Quach huong mai Posted 5 years ago
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Task 1 in writing ielts

Given are two maps, illustrate the pathways connect to a city hospital in 2007 and the change of this area after 3 years.
Overall, in 2010 the roads nearby the city hospital were more logical as well as convenient for inhabitants. Moreover, there was a big change in the public transportation system and parking spaces.
With regard to city hospital 2007, city hospital was constructed surrounded by Ring Road, connected to hospital road which was the main street for dwellers enter. As can be seen that bus stop was located on both sides of hospital road, it had 6 stations. People who commuted to work or see a doctor had to park their car in the east of hospital road, nearby bus stops.
When looking at the second map, there was more modern as well as scientific than before. Two roundabouts were built to link those roads, in order to release congestion traffic. What was the most remarkable was the bus station, which transformed into the left of hospital road with larger spaces. The staff car park was expanded and located in the right ones. Furthermore, inhabitants at that moment could park in a particular area, where spend for them, installed in the right of the city hospital.

  

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