Task 1 IELTS writting
Task 1
The chart shows the sales of five different kinds of jam from 2009 to 2014
The line graph indicates the spending of five different kinds of jam between 2009 and 2014
Overall, all types of jam witnessed a upward trend in sales, except for plum during the given period. Also, strawberry was the most popular kind with highest figure in the most period.
Starting at about 3.5 million units in 2009, the expenditures of strawberry quickly increased and reached a peaked of 7 million at the end of the period. Similarly, the figures for raspberry and grape grew considerably and stood at 5,5 million and 4,5 million respectively in 2014
Moving on, 2.5 million of plum was sold in 2009. However this numbers gradually dropped throughout the period and finally no unit was recorded in 2014. Regarding cherry, its sales saw a fluctuation around 2 million in the first two years and then this figure increased slightly before dropping to nearly 2.5 million in 2014
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First, you wrote exactly 150 words. Although that is the minimum number, you should try to write more to be on the safe side; 170-190 is ideal. You use both a comma and a full stop as a delimiter.
- First, you wrote exactly 150 words.
- Although that is the minimum number, you should try to write more to be on the safe side; 170-190 is ideal.
- You use both a comma and a full stop as a delimiter.
- Do not mix up different notation systems in one essay.
- Be consistent.
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First, you wrote exactly 150 words. Although that is the minimum number, you should try to write more to be on the safe side; 170-190 is ideal.
You use both a comma and a full stop as a delimiter. Do not mix up different notation systems in one essay. Be consistent. Use one or the other.
Next, you did not read my advice. You make many of the mistakes I describe. I explain most of
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