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The two pie charts depict why people drive a vehicle or use a bicycle to commute to work.

Overall, most people choose to cycle to work because it is a healthier option and it has a positive impact on the environment. Meanwhile, a lot of people surveyed drive to their workplace for the reason that it is comfortable and as well as due to the distance of their workplace from their home

In detail, about a third of people surveyed travel by cycling because of its health benefits. The same proportion of individuals believe cycling gives off less pollution. 15% prefer cycling since parking would not be an issue while 13% and 12% think it is a cheaper alternative and they would arrive at work faster than driving a vehicle respectively.

On the other hand, exactly 40% say that driving to work is comfortable. Around a fifth need vehicles to commute due to the distance of their work. 14% carry things to work and faster than cycling while 11% believe it is safer than cycling

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The two pie charts depict why people drive a vehicle or use a bicycle to commute to work.

Overall, most people choose to cycle to work because it is a healthier option and it is less polluting. ~~has a positive impact on the environment~~. Meanwhile, ~~a lot of~~ the people ~~surveyed~~ who drive to their workplace do so mainly for the reasons that it is comfortable and ~~as well as due to~~ the distance of their commute.. ~~of their workplace from their home~~

In detail, ~~about a third of~~ 30% of the people who cycle to work do so ~~people surveyed travel by cycling~~ (ungrammatical) because of its health benefits. The same proportion ~~of individuals~~ believe cycling gives off less pollution. ~~15%~~ (Do not begin a sentence with a numeral.) Another 15% prefer cycling since parking ~~would not be~~ is an issue while 13% ~~and 12%~~ think it is a cheaper alternative and 12% claim they would arrive at work faster than driving ~~a vehicle respectively~~.

On the other hand, (You need to make the transition clearer) exactly 40% say that the reason they are driving to work is comfort. ~~comfortable~~. Around a fifth need vehicles to commute due to the distance to of their work. 14% carry things to work and faster than cycling while 11% believe it is safer than cycling

Sample essay:

The two pie charts, one for cyclists and the other for car drivers, depict the reasons for the choice of this means of transportation to go to work. Each pie chart shows five reasons from the two surveys.

Overall, the reasons are different for the two types of commuting except for one, and that is a faster commute. The majority of cyclists make their choice because of physical fitness or because bikes have no exhaust to cause air pollution. In contrast, the majority of drivers cite comfort or a long commuting distance as the primary reasons.

In detail, about the same percentage claim that their choice is faster: 14% for the drivers and 12% for the cyclists. Three out of ten people who bicycle cite the exercise value, compared to four out of ten drivers, who like the comfort. The cyclists like the low costs (13%). ease of parking (15%) and avoidance of pollution (30%) Of the drivers, 14% need their vehicles to carry items and 21% say that the distance is too far for biking or that biking is not safe (11%).

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