Task 1 cambridge 10

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The charts illustrate how energy consumption and the result from them in Australian household.

At first glance it is clear that the percentages in the charts almost changed between the first and the second chart.

According to the charts, the percentage of water heating is not mostly changed (almost a third) but the energy consumption and gas emissions of heating ang other appliances have changed strongly. At heating, its percentage in the energy use chart has the biggest value (about 42 percents) but in other chart its figure is just about 15 percents. About otther appliances, it just use a minority energy but its figure about gas emission is 2 times bigger than about energy consumption.

Furthermore, at cooling, its percentage remain in the charts but the others have changed about between energy consumption and the result from them. About lighting and refrigeration, they just use a little energy but emiting heat and gas alot. More detail, all of their percentages about gas emission is 2 times bigger than their percentage about energy consumption.

In conclusion, comparing two charts, almost of percentages have changed between energy consumption and gas emission.

AlpheccaStars · Accepted Answer

It is clear that you did not understand these charts. They are not the same measures taken at a different time, showing a change in values over time. They are completely different measures taken at the same time.

The charts illustrate how energy consumption and the result from them in Australian household. (The content clause is not grammatical. e.g I know how you can get a good mobile phone for a cheap price. "How" must be followed by a clause. )

At first glance it is clear that the percentages in the charts almost changed (If something almost changes, it means that they did not change. e.g You tried to talk me into changing my opinion, and I almost did. - I kept my same opinion.) between the first and the second chart.

According to the charts, the percentage of water heating is not mostly changed (almost a third) but the energy consumption and gas emissions of heating ang other appliances have changed strongly. At heating, its percentage in the energy use chart has the biggest value (about 42 percents) but in other chart its figure is just about 15 percents. About otther appliances, it just use a minority energy but its figure about gas emission is 2 times bigger than about energy consumption.

Furthermore, at cooling, its percentage remain in the charts but the others have changed about between energy consumption and the result from them. About lighting and refrigeration, they just use a little energy but emiting heat and gas alot. More detail, all of their percentages about gas emission is 2 times bigger than their percentage about energy consumption.

In conclusion, comparing two charts, almost of percentages have changed between energy consumption and gas emission.

AlpheccaStars · Answer

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Tu?n Ð? Hoàng ThiênThe charts illustrate how energy consumption and the result from them in Australian household.

The first chart illustrates the typical use of energy in Australian homes, categorized by the type of usage: heating, water heating, cooling, lighting, refrigeration, and other appliances. The second chart illustrates the percentage of greenhouse gas emissions per type of energy usage. The two charts together tell us which appliances are more environmentally-friendly.

Tu?n Ð? Hoàng ThiênAccording to the charts, the percentage of water heating is not mostly changed (almost a third) but the energy consumption and gas emissions of heating ang other appliances have changed strongly.

Some appliances are far better than others, in that they generate low amounts of emissions compared to the amount of energy they use. Other appliances are much worse. Heating, for example, requires a lot of energy (42% of the total), but it is very environmentally-friendly, being responsible for only 15% of the greenhouse gas emissions. That is a ratio of nearly 3 to 1. The worst offenders are lighting, refrigeration and other appliances which are responsible for 50% of the emissions, but consume only 26% of the total energy. That is a ratio of 1 to 2, or six times more polluting than the heating system.

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