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The chart below shows the amount of money per week spent on fast foods in Britain

The bar chart compares Britain’s expenditure per week on three different types of junk foods including hamburger, fish and chips, pizza from three levels of income in 1990.

Overall, budget allocation priorities for kinds of junk foods differed across the three groups, and expenditure on fast food varied based on people’s income, which meant that high income group spent a higher budget compared to that in low income group.

In terms of high-income group, a total of approximately eighty million was spent on fast food per week, half being allocated for hamburger (40 million), and below 20 for pizza. Average income group set aside the highest amount for hamburger, with 32 million per week while it dedicated close to 25 million for fish and chips but assigned the smallest budget to pizza. Regarding the low income group, the largest expenditure went to fish and chips at about 16 million, followed by hamburger while around 6 million was spent on pizza.

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The chart below shows the amount of money per week spent on fast foods in Britain. The graph shows the trends in consumption of fast foods.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
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Expenditure (Pence per person) on Fast Food, by Income Groups, UK 1990

The bar chart compares ~~Britain’s~~ expenditure per week on three different types of junk foods including hamburger, fish and chips, pizza ~~from three levels of income~~ in Britain in 1990. The amounts, in pence per week, are shown for people in each of three income brackets, high, average and low.

Overall, ~~budget allocation priorities for~~ the spending on these kinds of junk foods differed across the three groups, and expenditure on fast food varied based on people’s income, ~~which meant~~ in that high income group spent a higher budget (wrong expression. We do not spend budget. We spend money. A budget is just a list of planned or actual spending by category. ) compared to that in low income group. (You sentence is too verbose and repetitive. Most of it can be removed without any change in the meaning.)

In terms of high-income group, a total of approximately eighty million was spent on fast food per week, half being allocated for hamburger (40 million), and below 20 for pizza. The average income group set aside the highest amount for hamburger, with 32 million per week while it dedicated close to 25 million for fish and chips but assigned the smallest budget to pizza. Regarding the low income group, the largest expenditure went to fish and chips at about 16 million, followed by hamburger while around 6 million was spent on pizza.

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The chart below shows the amount of money per week spent on fast foods in Britain

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