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Essay & Composition Writing

Task 1

The given maps portray the layout of Islip town at present and it's development plan for furture

Prima facie it is quite evident that, at present the town has some shops on both side of main road which crosses it from West to East . All the establishment are opposite the countryside which is at the north side . The housing in the south and facing countryside while a school is witness in the west region and a park in the east in the Islip town

Furthermore the plan is construct a dual carriage way which acess both points east to west . The new establishment are anticipated a bus station in the north which would replace the shops and the main road is transformed to the pedestrian way . The new accommodation will expect in the south whereas school and park still remain on the same place

Overall from the above picture the trend of all changes , which occurred in Islip town , for providing more function and area

  

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There are a large number of grammatical errors in your writing.

You miss the ending punctuation mark on many sentences, or insert an incorrect space.
You do not use the plural forms of nouns where necessary.
Do not use contracti

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