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Musicgold Posted 16 years ago
Hi,
Which one of the following sentences is better. If neither, how can I improve them?
1. Dollarmart plans to split its portfolio into the following five entities, with Dollarmart being the holding company with equity interests in each of the entities.
2. Dollarmart plans to split its portfolio into the following five entities, where Dollarmart will be the holding company with equity interests in each of the entities.
Thanks,
MG.
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Hi,
Which one of the following sentences is better. If neither, how can I improve them?
1. Dollarmart plans to split its portfolio into the following five entities, with Dollarmart being the holding company with equity interests in each of the entities.
2. Dollarmart plans to split its portfolio into the following five entities, where Dollarmart will be the holding company with equity interests in each of the entities.
Thanks,
MG.
Top answer
Hi, Both seem equally OK to me. Clive
- Hi, Both seem equally OK to me.
- Clive
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