Talk about the things we should do to help people with diabilities

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Talk about the things we should do to help people with disabilities

Everyone wants to live a normal, happy life, but there are people who for different reasons have robbed them of that freedom. when we are a compatriot we should do the following things

Firstly, help people with disabilities in daily life and vocational training, find jobs for people with disabilities so that they can be more confident in themselves and can live a life like everyone else.

Secondly, we can help people with mental disabilities, remove their complexes, let them live openly and in harmony with everyone. For example, organizing singing contests, poetry contests, etc.

Thirdly I think we should help people with physical disabilities such as donating tricycles for people with disabilities, personal belongings... to make life easier

Finally, to do those things, the most important thing in us is to have compassion, which is the most important, necessary and sufficient factor for us to help people with disabilities.

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Everyone wants to live a normal, happy life, but there are people who for different reasons have robbed (wrong verb form) ~~them~~ have been robbed / deprived of that freedom. They have a disability. when (every sentence must begin with a capital letter.) we are a compatriot we should do the following things(Every sentence ends with a punctuation mark.)

Firstly, First, help people with disabilities in daily life. ("First" means one thing, not two or three things. The sentence needs to have only one thing. The next sentences give more details.) ~~and~~ You can enroll them in vocational training, and then find jobs for them ~~people with disabilities~~ (Do not repeat. We know who you are writing about. ) so that they can be more confident in themselves and can live a life like everyone else.

Secondly, Second, we can help people with mental disabilities. We can be a friend to help them remove their complexes, ~~let them~~ so they can live openly and in harmony with everyone. ~~For example, organizing singing contests, poetry contests, etc.~~(That is not a sentence. There is no main verb. Do not use "etc." in formal writing.) For example, we can organize singing or poetry contests for them, so they can express their true feelings.

Thirdly Third, I think we should help people with physical disabilities. We can donate tricycles and other useful items to charities that help ~~for~~ people with disabilities~~, personal belongings...~~ (Do not use "..." in formal writing.) to make life easier

Finally, to do those things, the most important thing in us is to have compassion, which is the most important, necessary and sufficient attitude to have ~~factor~~ (wrong word) for us to help people with disabilities.

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