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User_gary Posted 18 years ago
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taking a walk, dizzied, sprinkled water
Yesterday while I was taking a walk on the roadside, I saw a car bumping to a lorry and in that accident all people including driver died. It was really a tragedy and I even dizzied when I saw the accident. Then local people approached me and sprinkled water onto my face to get conscious in me. I cannot forget this tragedy in my life.
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Yesterday while I was taking a walk along the road , I saw a car run into a lorry and everyone including the driver was killed . It was really an awful accident and I fainted when I saw it. Then some passersby came up and sprinkled water onto my face to revive me.
- Yesterday while I was taking a walk along the road , I saw a car run into a lorry and everyone including the driver was killed .
- It was really an awful accident and I fainted when I saw it.
- Then some passersby came up and sprinkled water onto my face to revive me.
- I'll never forget this tragedy.
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Yesterday while I was taking a walk along the road, I saw a car run into a lorry and everyone including the driver was killed. It was really an awful accident and I fainted when I saw it. Then some passersby came up and sprinkled water onto my face to revive me. I'll never forget this tragedy.
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