Yes, it's fine. You could also say: I don't like it that my new 55-inch monitor takes up too much space in my room. I am thinking about selling it and buying a smaller one.
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lucas21ctakes too much space upI think you'll find that this word order is not used much. It's typically "takes up too much space".