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User_gary Posted 16 years ago
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Take the dried up clothes, photos fell down

As soon as the clothes (that are hang up on line) dry up, take them and put in your cupboard.
Those photos which hung on the wall fell down and crashed. There were all over mirror shreds.

Please correct my sentences and suggest me better versions too.
  

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Hi, As soon as the clothes (that are hang up on line) dry up, take them and put in your cupboard. Those photos which hung on the wall fell down and crashed. There were all over mirror shreds.

  • Hi, As soon as the clothes (that are hang up on line) dry up, take them and put in your cupboard.
  • Those photos which hung on the wall fell down and crashed.
  • There were all over mirror shreds.
  • Please correct my sentences and suggest me better versions too As soon as the clothes (that are hung up on line) dry, take them and put them in your cupboard.
  • Those photos which hung on the wall fell down and smashed.
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Hi,

As soon as the clothes (that are hang up on line) dry up, take them and put in your cupboard.

Those photos which hung on the wall fell down and crashed. There were all over mirror shreds.

Please correct my sentences and suggest me better versions too

As soon as the clothes (that are hung up on line) dry, take them and put them in your cupboard.

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