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Roge0196 Posted 17 years ago
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Hi guys,
Could you help me once again with this e-mail?
In this e-mail, I'm trying to describle a problem to my technical department support. Please check if it is clear.
Thanks!!!!!
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Dear Mauro.
I'm sending some pics of the cable that we were talking about.
Check with the supplier if he can find the correct s/p code with this pics.
In addition I need to inform that some XX2302 that we sold here in Brazil, came with this cable defective. The connector that goes to the control electronic card is damaged. I took a picture of this damage calbe, although the camera was not so good, (then the picture is not very clear) you can see the problem on the right wire and compare to the left. This minimun detail makes all the difference. Due to this the signal sent by the microswitch doesn't reaches the control card. As a result the control card doesn't unlock the keyboard panel.
Only one distributor has formally informed us about this problem. He reported four machines with this malfunction, with the followng serial numbers: 60087 – 60082 – 60072 – 60073 – 60078
Could you help me once again with this e-mail?
In this e-mail, I'm trying to describle a problem to my technical department support. Please check if it is clear.
Thanks!!!!!
################################
Dear Mauro.
I'm sending some pics of the cable that we were talking about.
Check with the supplier if he can find the correct s/p code with this pics.
In addition I need to inform that some XX2302 that we sold here in Brazil, came with this cable defective. The connector that goes to the control electronic card is damaged. I took a picture of this damage calbe, although the camera was not so good, (then the picture is not very clear) you can see the problem on the right wire and compare to the left. This minimun detail makes all the difference. Due to this the signal sent by the microswitch doesn't reaches the control card. As a result the control card doesn't unlock the keyboard panel.
Only one distributor has formally informed us about this problem. He reported four machines with this malfunction, with the followng serial numbers: 60087 – 60082 – 60072 – 60073 – 60078
Top answer
Yes, it seems pretty clear. A few suggestions, just to tidy up a bit: Dear Mauro , I'm sending some pictures of the cable that we were talking about. Please check with the supplier to see if he can find the correct s/p code from these .
- Yes, it seems pretty clear.
- A few suggestions, just to tidy up a bit: Dear Mauro , I'm sending some pictures of the cable that we were talking about.
- Please check with the supplier to see if he can find the correct s/p code from these .
- In addition , I need to inform you that some XX2302s that we sold here in Brazil [remove comma] came with this cable defective.
- The connector that goes to the electronic control card is damaged.
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Yes, it seems pretty clear. A few suggestions, just to tidy up a bit:
Dear Mauro,
I'm sending some pictures of the cable that we were talking about. Please check with the supplier to see if he can find the correct s/p code from these. In addition, I need to inform you that some XX2302s that we sold here in Brazil [remov
Dear Mauro,
I'm sending some pictures of the cable that we were talking about. Please check with the supplier to see if he can find the correct s/p code from these. In addition, I need to inform you that some XX2302s that we sold here in Brazil [remov
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Hi Mr. Wordy, (it is funny!!!)
Thanks a lot for your contribution. These were really great tips.
One day I will achieve this level of writing skills.
And a special thank for call my attention to the number of machines and the serial numbers.
See you...
Rogerio
Thanks a lot for your contribution. These were really great tips.
One day I will achieve this level of writing skills.
And a special thank for call my attention to the number of machines and the serial numbers.
See you...
Rogerio
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