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Anonymous Posted 10 years ago
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Tailor to needs
If I asked a photographer for a quote and this was his response.
My package includes a photo session of an hour before your wedding day and 9 hours of presence on your wedding day until 8pm max.
It's an extra $400 if you want me to stay till midnight.
How would you naturally phrase the following?
1 Since we don't really want to do a photo session before our wedding, would you be able to propose to us a package that is (tailored)more to our needs.
2 Do you tailor packages to clients needs or do you just have one package.
Thank you
My package includes a photo session of an hour before your wedding day and 9 hours of presence on your wedding day until 8pm max.
It's an extra $400 if you want me to stay till midnight.
How would you naturally phrase the following?
1 Since we don't really want to do a photo session before our wedding, would you be able to propose to us a package that is (tailored)more to our needs.
2 Do you tailor packages to clients needs or do you just have one package.
Thank you
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Anonymous Since we don't really want to do a photo session before our wedding, would you be able to propose to us a package that is more tailored to our needs ? As shown. Anonymous Do you tailor packages to clients needs or do you just have one package ?
- Anonymous Since we don't really want to do a photo session before our wedding, would you be able to propose to us a package that is more tailored to our needs ?
- As shown.
- Anonymous Do you tailor packages to clients needs or do you just have one package ?
- As shown.
- CJ
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AnonymousSince we don't really want to do a photo session before our wedding, would you be able to proposeAs shown.to usa package that is more tailored to our needs?
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Anonymous Do you tailor packages to clients' needs, or do you just have one package?
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Since we don't really want to do a photo session before our wedding, would you be able to propose a package that is more
tailored to our needs?
Is tailored necessary?
Thanks
Is tailored necessary?
Thanks
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AnonymousSince we don't really want to do a photo session before our wedding, would you be able to propose a package that is moretailored to our needs?Is tailored necessary?Thanks'more to our needs' is understandable, but to my ear it sounds cut off, as if something is missing. It's not often that you have a modifier in front of a prepositional phrase in Eng
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