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Anonymous Posted 10 years ago
Grammar

Taglines

Hi, I just would like to hear some feedback regarding my taglines below. Are these taglines correctly written?

1. An unfortunate incident puts his career in jeopardy
2. He teaches a tough lesson, they put his career in jeopardy
3. A cop’s lifestyle puts into the hearts of criminals

Thank you.
Amy
  

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1. An unfortunate incident puts his career in jeopardy OK 2 and 3 seem to make no sense. Perhaps you mean this.

  • 1.
  • An unfortunate incident puts his career in jeopardy OK 2 and 3 seem to make no sense.
  • Perhaps you mean this.
  • 2.
  • He learns a tough lesson .
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3 Answers
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1. An unfortunate incident puts his career in jeopardy OK


2 and 3 seem to make no sense. Perhaps you mean this.


2. He learns a tough lesson. They put his career in jeopardy
3. A cop’s lifestyle puts fear into the hearts of criminals
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Thank you for the correction, Clive. The no 3, can I say "A cop life puts fear into the hearts of criminals"
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Yes. But I have to think a little harder to find your meaning.

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